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Penname: vail-kagami [Contact]
Real name: Member Since: Mar 02, 2008
Membership status: Member
While I mainly write the tenth Doctor it's not always Simm!Master he's paired with. In some stories it's AU!Master, or Eight/Jacobi!Master.
There's a lot of non-con in my fics and they are generally dark.
My DW fanfics that have nothing to do with this pairing can be found at my journal or at the link saying Web Site, which leads to my Teaspoon archive.
Reviews by vail-kagami
"These are the images from Tokyo, approximately 34 minutes ago. So sorry you couldn't be there for the live show, but I thought you'd prefer a private viewing."
Characters: Doctor (10th), Master (Simm); Genre: PWP, Year That Wasn't
Episode Spoilers: 3x12 The Sound of Drums
Types: Slash
Warnings: Graphic Sex, Mind Control, Non-con
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1525; Read Count: 2776; Completed: Yes
Updated: Mar 02, 2008; Published: Mar 02, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 03, 2008
Bah, the Master is evil! And he destroyed Ky˘to, which kind of pisses me off...
The idea of someone getting inside my head and taking control of my body's reactions is pretty disturbing for me and I try to avoid such stories. Still read this one because I know you're a great writer, and was not disappointed! It's brilliant, if twisted.

Author's Response: \"Twisted\", coming from you, in particular, is a great compliment. :) And I\'m glad you weren\'t disappointed, despite the psychological \"squick\" factor. Thanks for reading!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Beauty by ryttu3k [NC-17]
Liked [Reviews - 2]
The Master sees the destruction he creates. And it's beautiful.
Characters: Doctor (10th), Master (Simm); Genre: Darkfic, Year That Wasn't
Episode Spoilers: 3x11 Utopia, 3x12 The Sound of Drums
Types: Slash
Warnings: Graphic Sex
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 1125; Read Count: 3304; Completed: Yes
Updated: Mar 03, 2008; Published: Mar 03, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 03, 2008
Kind of sick and twisted, not that I'd mind. I especially liked how at the end the Doctor's morals took over, and how, at the beginning, he in a way took control from the Master with that memory. Very well done!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
There's no April Fools' Day on Gallifrey. So clever Academy students observe it every day.
Characters: Doctor (Theta Sigma), Master (Koschei), Rani (Ushas); Genre: Drabble, Humour
Episode Spoilers: None
Types: Gen
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 106; Read Count: 1919; Completed: Yes
Updated: Mar 03, 2008; Published: Mar 03, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 03, 2008
I'm pretty sure I commented on this one on another site but I could be wrong so here's another:
Since I read this the first time I have to resist calling our old, rusty toaster the Toaster of Rassilon, since somehow that phrase became one of my favourite of all time.
And I'd love to read those texts from the history section. Never thought Ushas wold have it in her!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words.\r\n\r\nSince I read this the first time I have to resist calling our old, rusty toaster the Toaster of Rassilon\r\n\r\nDon\'t resist! I\'m sure yours is just as authentic as the one in the Panopticon museum...
Chapter 1: student pranks
The Doctor ruins you. If you let him. (Doctor/Master, Rani/Master)
Characters: Doctor (10th), Martha Jones, Master (Ainley), Master (Delgado), Master (Jacobi), Master (Koschei), Master (Simm), Rani, Rani (Ushas); Genre: Drama, Missing Scene
Episode Spoilers: 3x13 Last of the Time Lords
Types: Het, Slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 27874; Read Count: 17668; Completed: Yes
Updated: Apr 02, 2008; Published: Mar 03, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 12, 2008
That was simply wonderful. I greatly enjoyed reading it, and it was a nice distraction from work. The interaction between the two of them through the ages was well portrayed and you did a fantastic job of inclding the Doctor in everything even though he never appeared.

Author's Response: My goodness! I\'m glad (honored, too) that you enjoyed it.
Chapter 1: Endings and Beginnings
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 28, 2008
Still awesome, this story, especially what he said to Martha. And I finally could reach chapter 6. It didn't work before, which is why I didn't comment earlier.

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m really glad you\'re still enjoying it. I probably did something the screw up chapter 6 accessibility --- I am a clod that way. Sorry for the inconvenience.
Chapter 7: Unsolicited Advice
Losing by aralias [PG-13]
Liked [Reviews - 1]
Lucy watches her husband and the Doctor on board the Valiant. She has already lost which is what he wants, but the Doctor just won't give in, and it's clearly starting to fascinate and annoy Harry.
Characters: Doctor (10th), Lucy Saxon, Master (Simm); Genre: Character Study
Episode Spoilers: 3x13 Last of the Time Lords
Types: Mixed
Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 672; Read Count: 1630; Completed: Yes
Updated: Mar 03, 2008; Published: Mar 03, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 03, 2008
Lucy's pov is always hard to write, but you did it brilliantly. I like to imagine that she knew of the way the Doctor and the Master daned around each other. it all makes sense here, well done!
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Academy by k_haldane [PG-13]
Liked [Reviews - 3]
Temptation on both sides.
Characters: Doctor (Theta Sigma), Master (Koschei); Genre: Character Study
Episode Spoilers: None
Types: Slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 960; Read Count: 5909; Completed: Yes
Updated: Mar 03, 2008; Published: Mar 03, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 03, 2008
Weren't they adorable? Koschei's spoinling Theta, how unnoble... I'm not sure I would turst his intentions in Theta's place, but maybe I'm just oversuspicious because I know how it'll end with them. Anyway, sweet story! I like how you portrayed them.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Dust by Fiara Fantasy [PG-13]
Liked [Reviews - 2]
Theta and Koschei finally make it to the University and decide their rooms need a change. It doesn't quite go as planned.
Characters: Doctor (Theta Sigma), Master (Koschei), Rani (Ushas); Genre: Fluff, Humour, Romance
Episode Spoilers: None
Types: Slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: Prydonian Misadventures
Word count: 2099; Read Count: 2279; Completed: Yes
Updated: Mar 05, 2008; Published: Mar 05, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 06, 2008
I really liked this, very good start! I'm looking foreward to more, and your description of Koschei and Theta seems very accurate.
The one thing that bothered me a bit were descriptions like "eyes the color of polished silver" or "chocolaty ringlets", which sounds a little odd if it's used too often. I think sometimes it's better if the hair is just 'brown'.
But that's just a personal opinion, probably caused by the fact that Mary-Sues are usually described like that. An insictive reaction, you could say. When Ushas appeared the first time my first, involuntay thought was: No! Kill it!
Apart from that I loved they way you wrote this. Only there are a few commas missing, mostly after words like 'well', or before or after the name of the person that's adressed. It's a bit distracting at times.

Author's Response: I can\'t thank you enough. I got con-crit!\r\nI never thought of being overly-descriptive. I write a lot of poetry so that probably has more of an impact than I think. I\'ll check for commas, my grammar check doesn\'t catch very much. ;) For Ushas, I was trying to symbolize her being cold, like metal. She\'ll start getting fleshed out next story, so no Mary-Sue there. I really love your stories, so I\'m glad you enjoyed this.
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The moth flutters irritably, back and forth in a kind spider’s web.

Post LoTTL, AU. Just... a vague little descriptive piece.
Characters: Doctor (10th), Master (Simm); Genre: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Study
Episode Spoilers: 3x13 Last of the Time Lords
Types: Gen
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: None
Word count: 562; Read Count: 1482; Completed: Yes
Updated: Mar 06, 2008; Published: Mar 06, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Mar 06, 2008
Wow, beautiful!
I suppose I might really have been like that, had it actually been. Impressive work.

Author's Response: Why thank you. Thank you very much :)
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
The teacher listens
Characters: Doctor (10th), Master (Simm); Genre: Drabble
Episode Spoilers: None
Types: Slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: Farringham
Word count: 138; Read Count: 2053; Completed: Yes
Updated: Aug 06, 2008; Published: Aug 06, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Aug 10, 2008
Nice idea! Poor Mr. Smith, haunted by another man's past...
Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ah yes, my dear Doctor. We burn together now.
Characters: Doctor (5th), Master (Ainley); Genre: Drabble, Missing Scene, Romance, Series
Episode Spoilers: 129 The King's Demons
Types: Slash
Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents Series: Candlelight Bath
Word count: 100; Read Count: 1852; Completed: Yes
Updated: Aug 27, 2008; Published: Aug 27, 2008
Reviewer: vail-kagami (Signed)
Aug 28, 2008
Wow. Powerful story in such a few words!
Chapter 1: Flammable